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Oct 17Liked by Thérèse Judeana

That last line...! I'm hooked!

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Oct 16Liked by Thérèse Judeana

Suitably eerie, but not too overboard.

Seeing Grant in the background was interesting. Is he a ghost as well, or is he reincarnated?

I had to think twice about your mention of the daughter being autistic in 1887, when the earlies diagnosis was in 1943. Other than that, I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

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Thanks for mentioning that! It’s a good point to bring up. I wondered about it, however, I’m thinking that a retrospective diagnosis could end up working here (for reasons) It’s information that Grant somehow knows… 🤔

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Oct 16Liked by Thérèse Judeana

Agreed. It wasn't a major sticking point, just something that made me look it up. 😒 But then I always look up medical and law enforcement facts in stories, because well, it's what I've done.

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It’s always good to fact-check, and I appreciate it, because I’ve slipped up with historical facts before! I thought about checking the dates for this one and then left it alone, so it’s definitely something I’ll consider swapping out if it doesn’t end up working well. Thanks for bringing it to mind, because that will make sure I remember to explain it.

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